I hate it when
my friends are
fighting and I feel
like I have to take sides.
I hate it when
they both give
glares to one another
and it just needs to stop.
I hate it when
one calls eachother
foul names and write
about the other person.
Nobody, especially friends
should feel excluded from
the group because I know
how that feels.
It feels like nobody
wants you around
but the truth is
there really not your
friends if they make things up about you.
A contest entry
- 1000 tr0phies! wh00t! by amaranthine lover.
1750 points, ended February 17, 2009, 105 entries
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Comments
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Nice
I hate it when freinds do this and most of the time I get caught up in the middle.
Good Job
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Great :)
Damn, forgot applause.
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I really like this, everyone's been there so It's real easy to relate to, well written, good job
School's going well for me too thanks, how're you?
-Rach -
I know how this feels. It was like something that happened to two of my friends this weekend. I hope that they make up. They are going to have a baby together. They will probably work it out.
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hmmm ...this sounds like it was about somebody?
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wow devil, awesome poem!!! this was amazing and i can understand this very much. keep up the good work!
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i hate the same things so i can totally relate to what ur writing about. good job i liked it.
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