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Weeping nude

hair covering tears
hands covering her face
what's left of her
bereft of soul and heart

all that remains
are the lines on her face
too old for the skin underneath

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Regenhart

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  • chilali
    December 14, 2008

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    A very interesting write. Nice take on the picture. Thank you for entering and good luck.

    Much love
    Ylova

  • Revwilliamfoos
    December 4, 2008

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    I found this to be intresting and I have found this delemia many times keep doing well
    love the rev papa