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Masterpiece

We,
Breaths of overwhelming power
Images of immaculate beauty

Man, Woman
Black, White
Hindu, Muslim
Rich, Poor
Genius, Lunatic
Saint, Sinner

breathe, live, die
in one loom
as perfect shades, lines
interwoven threads
to form, to create His
Masterpiece...

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  • Ellis gold member
    July 20

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    Outstanding

    This is magnificent. Some day after more generations of people have come, it will be as this (we hope).


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    Yes you are very true and very much well taken ..there is a depth and the universalness around your words..well done...