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Throw It All Away For love.



Throw it all away for love
don't wait..don't hesitate
the magic passes by...and graces
others with its potent powers
empowering others with its joyous faces,
leaving you just weak-kneed...sad
and oh, so damned alone.

Shorten the distance between
two possibilites not yet realized.
Turn the miles into smiles,
the world is your backyard,
and the girl next door waits
just around the corner.
Finding love isn't that hard,
it's much harder to ignore it
Throw the reasoning away
and just.... go for it.

Throw it all away on love
don't ever dodge it, using logic
it's not something you comprehend
it overwhelms what's practical
go forth...pursue without a plan
ten fingers laced between two hands
two hearts as one, let joy ascend

Throw it all away for love
chase it, and then embrace it tight
and once you have it don't compare
bask in the paradise of two
enjoy the daylight and the night
share all the pleasures waiting there.
In life true love is truly rare,
for true love...throw the rest away
accept no less..and it will stay.

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  • JackFellDown
    December 3, 2008

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    Wow

    I really like this, this is awesome. The free flow here is nice, but not abrupt. I can easily follow you and I do think this is the spirit in any journey for love. The excited tone of somebody who has chosen to sieze the day. I agree the longer you wait the more it hurts.

    "Turn the miles into smiles"

    Now that line is really heart striking. I love it. Awesome journey.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    This is so romantic, and does point out that one often has to throw it all away to stay with love... all the bits and pieces of one's life that aren't that important any more. I love the beautiful craft of the poem as well!


  • JePeTto
    December 2, 2008

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    I Loved It.

    Amazing, a true point needed to be made.

    Thank you for sharing, I know I enjoyed reading it and it's honesty.


  • butterflywriter
    December 2, 2008
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    Great advice...

    go forth...pursue without a plan
    ten fingers laced between two hands


  • Quill Bill
    December 2, 2008
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    a great poem and so true,

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