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Whats a troublesome fate.

Walk away
Ignore the pain
Forever you'll find
The release is in vain

You might feel that
It is worth it in the end
Moments of happiness
Sorrow is just beyond the bend

People can't or wont relate
What a troublesome fate!
To be judged by minor details
The sense of security fails

Walk away
Ignore the pain
Forever I find
The release is in vain

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Ahmmm....t'was fun :]

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  • Lonely Christina
    December 2, 2008
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    i liked this, good job and thanks 4 the entry.