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Sleigh Ride

 

Santa fills his sleigh with toys,

readying it for his Christmas ride.

 

 

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http://allpoetry.com/poem/4808913

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 2

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    yes..indeed you are the creator of HIS image..and HIS festivity ..love it..a wonderful scenario you have made hre my friend..well done..


  • White Tiger 96
    December 4, 2008

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    Beautiful write!! I like the Christmas theme. The Background and picture are absolutly Beautiful! It feels like your in the snow! Hehe! Your a great writer! I look forward to reading more from you! Hope you have a wonderful Christmas!!


  • daviscth silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    I like your sentence a lot sweetie but the picture and background really take my breath away. I get so tired os seeing the strange looking Santa pictures, I'm glad you used one of the old fashioned ones.