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Midnight Thoughts

Midnight thoughts
Devour joy
Sending hope
Into a fatal tailspin
Of wondrous song

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  • Lady Michaella
    December 3, 2008
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    i love this, darkk and light
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  • broken-colours
    December 2, 2008

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    What I draw from this is that the later it gets at night, the more you think and the more your thoughts become pessimistic and it seems like everything in the world that's ever been your downfall comes back to haunt you.

    I liked this.