The night stretches on
and she awaits
a decision.
The decision on
whether or not
her life
is a worthy
one.
She was given a choice
to stay in this life
and continue to do
as she has.
Or to leave
having done
all she feels she can
and join
the All Mighty One
in Heaven
sharing in His
love and wisdom.
So she awaits
a decision
as the cool night breeze
surrounds her with soothing music.
A sign
a thought
an idea...
is all she is waiting for.
Which is the true path
to stay
or leave.
Has she done everything
in this life that she needs too?
Or does she have more work to do?
To stay or leave?
What is the answer?
Author notes
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700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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This was a great take on the prompt, you have woven magic with your words that reach out to the reader, great job, Blessings John
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This is a beautiful write... I love the choreography of your words... Well done and congratulations on the recognition...
Ken
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Beautifully penned
Your words questioning and a decision is for the taking
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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Please can you complete your entry today for me
so I can judge
Thanks Julie -
love this picture it is soooo cute. And a wonderful prompt.
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