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Richer Place

Perfect moment captured in my mind
under warm moonlit starry skies
Mesmerising elegance draped in silk,
as only the best materials should adorn
this most heavenly angelic creature
Making this land a richer place X

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    A richer place indeed
    Beautifully penned and expressive
    Thank you for your entry and good luck
    Julie


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    What beautiful imagery this piece portrays, along with a feeling of warmth. A wonderful take on the picture. Good luck in the contest

    Your name...Yorkshire Kevin, wouldn't be Yorkshire, UK would it?


    • Yorkshire kevin
      December 3, 2008
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      HI
      Thank you for your nice comments,and yes it is Yorkshire in the UK
      KEVIN X


      • LadyDementia gold member
        December 3, 2008
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        Ditto Me to! Nice to see someone in the same time zone...lol


  • maralisa silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    a delightful take onthe promt lovely imagery good luck inthe contest maralisa

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