I woke up one morning at night
Got up and sat down up right
I picked up the closest t-shirt and decided to put it on
but when i did all the colors fell off
so I went to the kitchen right then
to get something to put them in
but when i came back they were already gone
I found them sleeping in my bed
Author notes
i could have really written more to this one but i was trying to keep it into the word limit... 
it was fun i think i'll try n continue it after the contest.. i mean really dont u wanna know what else happenes when i try to finish getting dresses lol
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- Write a Short Silly Poem - Paying It Forward Contest by poetrandy.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2008, 35 entries
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haha i agree with trekkergirl it does sound like some kind of trip.
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wow this sounds like someone was having a weird drug trip of some kind... either that or their o2 sats were way down. Lack of oxygen can sure make you see some really weird stuff. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Execellent
Great imagery! I like this piece allot. I would like to see you finish it though. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Wishing you many blessings,
With much love,
Robert
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This is real cute, it reminds me of Dr. Suess poems.... It's fun, awesome
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interesting imagery, i like this! if you wanted to keep it silly you could, but you could go more strange and abstract with this and it would be really interesting....... the word "I" should be capitalized, sometimes it isn't. overall great write!
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Very neat
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Very cute!
good write! Good luck in the contest!
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cool
this poem was cool!
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