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Out of My Silent Mind

Dark moves of affection,
Taking control of me.
Filling my head with fantasies,
Of there being a you and me.
A lust burns within my fragile body,
At the thought of you being mine.

Startled topaz eyes glare.
Trying to pierce into my thoughts.
You should know that all of them,
Have only you to bare.

How did I get here?
With your icy grip on my hand,
How did I get here?
With a vampire on my lips.

I feel a darkness in your every breath,
Being with you could kill me;
But being without you is a certain death.
I'd rather die by your fanged kiss,
Than by a frozen heart from when you left.

Sometimes your a beautiful mystery,
I can't tell what's on the tip of your tongue;
But when you gleam that crooked smile,
I can feel my worries disappear,
And all I long for is your lips crushing mine.

How did I get here?
With your icy grip on my hand,
How did I get here?
With a vampire on my lips.

Author notes

20. Decode - Paramore

Well since this song was basically written for Twilight, the meaning of the song and Twilight inspired me.
The title is pretty much Bella saying: Even though he can't get in my head to read my thoughts, he's always there.'
The whole poem is written in Bella's perspective and from the inspiration of the song, she is asking herself 'how did I manage to be with a vampire?'
I hope you enjoyed reading my interpretation!

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    December 22, 2008
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    Fabulous, utterly fabulous .. thanks for entering!


  • sophia moonfairy
    December 2, 2008

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    Wow! this is great I really enjoyed this write this is amazing I loved every-line this is exactly what I was looking for this is a wonderful write and the flow is good the rhyme is great and the form is unique. well thanks for sharing this master piece! like omg I love it and the movie twilight is amazing even if I never seen it anyway best of luck and many blessing and love
    always

    Maria


  • Missa
    December 2, 2008
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    love that song! i'll be checking back to read this when your finished!