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Rose Letters To Your Soul (1)

My dearest flower inside my heart
and the only one who cherishes my love from the start
the only one who will shine with me until the end
listen to the words that makes you my dearest friend
look at me with eyes that love me forever
i keep your rose shinning knowing that we can go wherever
and still you will stay close to me as ever
when i watch your sweetest smile on reflections
it does sweep through my mind completing its perfections
so every mirror that i see reminds me
it is like your sweetest shadow stays behind me
watching every moment with the sweetest smile
and when i speak of you this picture i compile
a perfect angel inside the care of my hands
its a magical moment like when a beam of light bends
and every color comes out of  a prism
and i can see your perfect gentleness in the sweet rhythm
it plays along as you shine like a diamond
so our memories are made of gold floating on a time pond
and our love so tenderly making the sweetest waves
hence i will always love my angel in every moment love enclaves.


Author notes

ive always had an idea that roses are some kind of letters that you can read forexample the words are written in their colors and every description they have commenting on how beautiful a person is making a resemblance with roses as she sees the real roses and imagine what the sender was trying to say. so read this and imagine it and associate it with the picture in option two not that first colourless picture of skulls with no beauty description at all or story to tell.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    I love roses too
    Such a beautiful poem you have penned
    Reading your AN fits ...
    Softly written
    Thank you and good luck
    Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    a wonderful poem your imagery and emotions are wonderful good luck inthe contest maralisa

  • michaeline
    December 2, 2008

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    I can relate to what you are trying to say.I believe you should change the backround to have a rose on it.It would intensify your thoughts I think.Your yhming was really good in this though at times it seems to have been a little forced.Good luck on the contest.