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Under Spell




A look so sweet, I drown in those blue eyes,
like a rainbow to fit in with my green visions,
feel a pain to inscribe, she wants to forget,
her tears drip, boiled, to weep on my shoulder.

I learnt her sign language to sound beautiful,
closed my eyes to imagine her breath on my face,
our hands gently intertwined without any penalty,
to share a life, to read her lips' softness to kiss.

Firstly, I lay my hands on my heart, then on her's,
my eternal angel looks in fantasy to smile happiness,
I related my life to her's, so our dreams do not end,
in silence, we look our souls crossed being so linked.

You, so young, don't deserve this evil, runs in mind,
a destiny smiled despite infinity does not save you,
in your veins run the sap from a celestial love you love,
beyond the flaky clouds without disclosing your treasure.

You're my fantasy angel, an eternity will last for ever,
I'll never grow old but a man sensitive of sensations
can't wait to resist to watch, to embrace you in my arms,
to offer my heart in mystical caresses to live under spell.  



 

 

 

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Prompt: Option 2

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Fantasy Angel

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  • sharptooth
    December 31, 2008

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    a very unconventional love, indeed. i like the concept of fantasy you mention

    i love the line(s)
    "I learnt her sign language to sound beautiful,
    closed my eyes to imagine her breath on my face,
    our hands gently intertwined without any penalty,"

    i thought it was very well said.
    thanks for enteringggg the contest
    hope you enjoyed participating
    & best of luck!


  • November-Dani
    December 3, 2008

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    Beautiful. Fantastic use of words and this was very suited to the contet. Very very well done. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
    Dani.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    I re read this poem to absorb the impact of your words.
    Touches of sadness, beautifully crafted.
    Each stanza fed me on to the next with such ease.
    Thank you and best wishes to you
    Julie


  • KayJay
    December 2, 2008
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    The longings of the heart... a sensitive and beautiful write. Well done and all my best.
    Ken


  • maralisa silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    a brilliant take onthe promt full of strong emotions and feelings good luck inthe contest maralisa

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