She sits there in the moonlight caressed by the stars
Waiting with a secret smile,tantalizing me with her charm
Is it a dream or is she really here tonight
Enchanted and mystical she spreads her beauty around
She captivates everyone without making a sound
The stars how they twinkle only for her gain
Her beauty is everywhere and is my only pain
She hides in my soul and whispers sweet nothings in my ears
I love her so much to her I do hold dear
Her fingertips carry promise,and light refracts within
The memory of our nights always come back again
My dream angel bestow on me your time
Please come to me tonight and say that you'll be mine
Author notes
I cose option 2 fantasy angel
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie contest by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does this make you feel .
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Makes me feel content and a hope of reassurance, nice writing.
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this is beautiful, it makes me feel warm and happy. thanks for a great write.
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This is a beautiful poem, i love what you have done with the picture you have expressed it well with the nice word choice and the rhyme you have used in this beautiful poem, keep up the writing, ~Amy
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Ahhhhh such a soft sweet write. Thank you for sharing. I remember the clear night in the country, sky filled with stars, and sometimes a halo around the moon. beautiful I saw my first one at age 5, never forgotten it.
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Beautiful and can feel the need of support to have a dream angel come and just make things better...blessings in contest.
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This is very pretty
Michaeline this is very pretty. You put so much feeling in it too. You used sight ,sound ,and touch. Beautifully written
Stevie.me
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Dreams and wishes painted in such a wonderful way
The feelings flow and her touch is felt
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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Dream Angel... This sounds like the one I dream of... only it is a male
What a soft and enjoyable read! Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
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Warm and loving, you've penned a really enjoyable poem... Well done... this should do well.
Ken
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a wonderful take onthe promt your emotions are very deep and powerful good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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Very pretty. I enjoyed this poem. Great job.
Mike
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