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Wanna die



Die die die
All I want is to get away from the mankind
Get away forever,
So I could feel better.

What should be my end?
Should I jump into the sea,
Or off the bridge?
Maybe I should swallow some pills,
Or simply take the razor blade to my wrist.

Die die die
Is all I want to do,
So take me satan
I am coming with you.

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  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    December 2, 2008
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    wow

    this poem is really powerful. i can feel you pain. wonderful poem!