She sits within a sparkle
beneath aurora sky
starlight paints her mind
her eyes become a sigh.
Twilight glows a rhapsody
spelldust on her lips
a wish inside a promise
beneath her fingertips
Shimmering in softened lace
I sink within her charms
my wish of mortal frailty
to hold her in my arms.
Author notes
Picture Prompt.
Option 2 Fantasy Angel.
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie contest by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow this is just gorgeous! Your wording is beautiful indeed 'a kiss within a promise' I love that line particularly. All the best with this beautiful piece.
Gaylene
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You held me spellbound with this beautiful descriptive poem.
The softness of words and the rhyme
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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A magical piece, the metaphors are awesome and portray vivid imagery, the rhyme is superb. A stunning piece and a joy to read. You have a great talent in your quill. All the best in the contest
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Truely a lovely and loving write... sensually soft and heart warming... Well done.
Ken
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a delightful take onthe promt beautiful imagery good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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Beautiful.Picture is breathtaking as well as your loving words caress the page.Your ryhming is perfect.Good luck in the contest.
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