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Treasures of the mind

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By the light of the,
quicksilver sand,
a fairy looks on by,
at the scarlet night,
twinkling bright ,
remembering all
the  beauty,
sent out to you
and me .

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  • chilali
    December 10, 2008

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    Such beautiful imagery! I loved this. Congratulations on the HM The flow was amazing. Such a lovely write!

    Much love
    Ylova


  • daviscth silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    I love the imagery in this. It goes great with the photo Congratulations on the HM dear. Love the BG too!!!


  • Desire gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Wowzers!

    This is one Beauty of a verse and so compliments the physical picture
    Love the words: scarlet night
    Excellent!!
    Congratulations on Your HM!!
    Wooooooo Hoooooooo!!
    (throws some serious confetti)

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Alyzeh
    December 3, 2008

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    This was so lovely. I loved the sweet flow..and the background is just amazing too. Congratulations on winning the HM! Well deserved.

    Love
    Alyzeh


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Aw such an enchanting and endearing poem you have penned here.
    Thank you for your beautiful entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Very lovely! Soft flow and imagery to fit the beauty of the picture...you brought it to life with your words...beautiful and sweet as always...
    Best,
    sis


  • KayJay
    December 2, 2008

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    Very lovely... you've taken the simple elegance of the image and transformed it into your feelings... thank you for letting me share your vision... it's truely lovely.
    Ken

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