A countenance so soft, sweet and serene
Lets you glimpse the beautiful mind
lying unseen
Wonderous calm loving eyes,caressing look
gentle sighs
Voice consummate,sounds lyrical,
a nightingale sings
You are an Angel Spirit
I feel the pulse of your wings
Never a cruel thought an unkind word
ever said
This wonderous intellect,dulcet,
nestled in your head
A contest entry
- Seduction of the mind. Females Preferred. by HomeGrown.
1000 points, ended December 26, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Wonderful
Very creative and well said. Thank you for sharing.
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niice "you are an angel spirit" i like tht.
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This has a good flow.
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Voice consummate,sounds lyrical
That is my favorite line in the whole thing. I think that you vocabulary was excellent in this write. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! -
Okay, I like it, but I have to say, I don't feel very seduced. I feel like you've told me a few things about myself, and it's just not enough to get me to give in. Thanks for the entry, and best of luck to you.
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