Writing is the lifeblood of society, and In order to be free, one must first see the need to put a pen to a paper and scribble I AM ME. There is no... no other requirement to freedom other then the all mighty word, words such as but not limited to the works of free men, dead men, wo-men, and woe-men. I stand before you a testament to all that a steady hand and sharp mind can accomplish using merely the idea of communication.
The word invited "god" to a party of those who are worthy but threw his ass out, finding the self righteous ideals of religion lacking. Cast down "god" could do nothing but spreads rumors and lies through the very essence that had cast him down.
I stand before the immaculate alter of language, naked. Bearing all that is and ever will be on the tip of my tongue, wielding my pen like a crazed individualist half drunk on the notion of self deprecation through mental castration. I asked for love and am granted salvation through the seduction of poetry. I am all that ever was and ever will be, because I AM ME.
And that’s what sets me free
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The third stanza and the first read unequivocally. They are honestly superb. The second, has an excellent idea, and a huge potential, but as of now its relatively untapped. I'd like to see it a bit more developed, but in a whole this piece has a lot of great ideas, and I enjoyed this piece



