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Nevaeh's Game

Nevaeh has a game to play
So listen to her well
And we can play it everyday
As far as I can tell
Now clap your hands and turn around
Jump up real high and hit the ground
Now clap your hands
Now clap your hands
And try to make a whistle sound

Nevaeh has a game to play
I promise we’ll have fun
Just watch Nevaeh go this way
Get off the ground and run
Now stop right there and clap your hands
Just follow all of her commands
Now stop right there
Now stop right there
She’s taking you to magic lands

Nevaeh has a game to play
She’s still the leader here
So flap your arms and fly away
I hope that I am clear
Now be a bird that’s in the air
And you can fly most everywhere
Now be a bird
Now be a bird
Now you can lead us so it’s fair

 

 

 

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  • Ithica silver member
    December 19, 2008

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    You have captured the simplicity of children playing with a whopping dollap of fun!!! A the Trijan Refrain suited it perfectly!!!


  • Whispered Devotions
    December 17, 2008

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    If you do not mind, after this is over I would like to give credit to you with this poem on my Authors page?


    Amy


    • Amera gold member
      December 18, 2008
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      Of course you can; I wrote it for you.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    This is beautiful, you have a wonderful imagination, all kids would love this. Well done and best to you in the contest


  • Alyzeh
    December 11, 2008

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    Hahaha. Awww. how adorable. This is such a sweet write. Made me smile.

    Thank you for sharing this
    Love
    Alyzeh

  • Whispered Devotions
    December 6, 2008
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    awww this is so cute and sweet. I loved this beautiful write. It was such a testament to the pure joy of a child's play and laughter. I could literally envision my little girl jumping and dancing around to this. WOW! Thank you for this pleasantly fun poem.


    Amy


  • artis
    December 5, 2008

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    wow, was out of my chair, perched on a windowsill trying to fly,

    some far off place in Florida beckoned, where we could become the pied sand-pipers of all the kids in that sunny state. But alas my wings could not match Nevaeh. Now my arms are tired, and I will simply rest them over some keys that are not islands, just black squares for my fingers to fly over. Cute poem, Kids'll love it. ~~Artis


  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    You are very very good at these and I think it takes a lot to write these kind of poems but you seem to excell at them


  • Pure Thought silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    I second what Jeff said.


  • Desire gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Precious~

    Oh My this is one Gorgeous verse that is a Joy to read- Loved the rhyme also the playful nature-
    didn't want it to end
    Excellent as always Form Queen
    More More
    I was doing the moves while reading

    Keep that quill dancing Beautiful~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • HaleyMary
    December 2, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. Wonderful flow. This had great rhyme and it seemed to have a great beat to it, as well. This poem reminded me of the nursery rhymes I would read as a kid. You have talent, Sis. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 2, 2008

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    this is good, i mean that, i like this poem that you wrote here and i hope she will too, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • StarEyes
    December 2, 2008

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    Sounds like the perfect piece for my grandsons, and the daycare I am hoping to open up. This is great! You have to be one of the best when it comes to childrens rhymes!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • chilali
    December 2, 2008

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    Aww. This is just amazing Amera! I loved it. I am so going to read this to my neice. Hehe. She loves rhymes and poetry! Thank you for sharing this great piece and good luck in the contest

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    LOVE THIS!

    I'm going to read this to my little one and by the end of the week, she have a new 'song' to sing! excellent my friend..


  • Wandika gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    Well done

    I think you followed the prompt and have written a solid entry.

    Jim


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    this is amazing!! I have to read this to Aneka! She has a collection of your work!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    December 2, 2008

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    Amera,

    I want to play.lol I can't jump to high, but I would make a great bird, cause i can fly-i can fly.

    Joe


  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    An Amera special

    Trijan refrains are perfectly suited to children's rhyming and I suspect you are the best children's rhymer on the planet.

    Lovely stuff

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