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A Separating Peace

Butterfly toes tickling
the fingertips of your content
smell the cool glass of raspberry lemonade
sweating
against your palm
buzzing bee begging for handouts
pollen grasping his legs
humming his merry way
past your ear

Sun savoring your bare limbs
relaxed and motionless
as the lazy grass snake in the shadows
of the plastic pool

Arms strong from the woodcutting
Palms calloused from the ax
Eyes sharp from the hunt
Knuckles swoll from the fighting
Nose broken from the sport

You sit in the lawn chair
Marveling at the in-laws
And how their arms have folds as the sheets
Their children have decaying mouths
And their yard has too many edges

Stubble your unspoken protest
She spends her time with them
burning her eyes out
With Soaps and Bridge and fine city living
While you tan your hide in the back yard
Making your dark haired be-freckled peace
With the sun, snake and bee

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  • michaeline
    December 5, 2008

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    Full of imagry and alot of feeling.I liked what you had to say and I know it took quite awhile to get it just right.To bad you didn't win a trophy it deserved one.Great job.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    December 3, 2008

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    Ahh, those humbling days of yesteryear, you've brought them backlol good luck in the contest