Spitting down,
he shoveled the
dirt on her face
first,
whistling
their song...
Author notes
13 dark with light ending....
A contest entry
- DO IT IN 13 WORDS! ME..? YES YOU!! by Lady Michaella.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is about perfect for this contest I think!
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Fantastic
I love it. I've wanted to do this to a few people in my life lol. This is a good piece and fits the prompt to a T with wonderful flow. Great job! Regards, ~
Gypsy~
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ooohhh - you can do DARK!!!
What a chilling image!! Like a grave-digger who enjoys his work too much!...lol
For just a few words, this is a GREAT image!
best wishes in the contest
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ouch!!! wow, whoever wrote this, this is.. like... WOA. if its the way i think it is, abit the grave n stuff, then u are loaded with tallent. woaaa! im shivering !
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