you jive your lines along your hips
to a night time breeze
like a slow
flute arpeggio
strives the way butterflies
do
but I want you
how the moon captures
ballet in a garden
or do you just want to be lovers again
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You mix your images and sounds together into something for the eyes, the ears, the heart and the soul. It's like listening to Thelonios Monk while viewing a Picasso painting (early Picasso).
Wonderful writing.
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This puts me in mind of midnight jazz. Very smooth jazz.
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Yes. To all of the above. 
♥
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fun
This poem is romantic.
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Moqui, you have a gift
I seriously don't lend people too much along the lines of 'gift', but damn if you aren't something else. I appreciate your work and I look forward to becoming a Takodan.
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i had a stream of sepia tone images fluttering all around my mind, while reading this.
very good.
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I like this its very different then what I'm used to reading and I really enjoyed this from you!
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