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Rhyming Nothingness

Tuesday Morning
Deadly Warning
Winter skies
Blind my eyes
Flash of light
Oh so bright
Loud crack
Breaks the black
People scatter
Windows shatter
Babies cry
Wondering why
God is mad
Are we bad
Our last chance
Hopeless Romance

Author notes

Just random rhyming
Didn't really have a goal

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  • condor gold member
    September 25

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    I loved this. It was abrupt and read so well. For random rhyme, you certainly managed to create a story in the words and the story I got was one of ful blossoming roamance that woke the heavens. Love the style and it read so damned well. Sometimes random words you put down say so uch more than you might think. I ,oved the feeling of danger you created. Great stuff! Keep up the great work.


  • movedon
    December 2, 2008

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    pretty sure i already commented on this one...oh ya i did

    BUT I LOVED IT AND STILL DO!

    mylee


  • JesusFreak92
    December 2, 2008

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    you know even though these are all random ryhmes, they still go together in the form of a poem. i'm actually getting a story from this. coolio! lol. keep it up.