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xXx...Hopeless Existence...xXx

Distraught emotion,
Tangled lies,
Joyful pleasures.
Cease existence,
Ruby beaded wrists,
Dangle hopelessly...

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Exactly 13 words...

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  • sunset disaster
    December 17, 2008
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    your poem is deep emotional and so are your other poems your cool


  • Lady Michaella
    December 2, 2008

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    lol, thats really sad.
    a really powerful dark write, to think that u can fit in so much imagery. this is excelent.


  • redbird
    December 1, 2008
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    wow, that's a lot of adjectives.