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Eve's Slayer

Scarecrow
stalks hall
with hatchet,
terror vanishes
with burp,
swearing off
midnight snacks.

A contest entry

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  • maralisa silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    haha a wonderful poem love the humourous imagery its wonderful good luck inthe contest maralisa

  • carole21
    December 2, 2008
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    ha ha . . nice take on the prompt . . good luck in the contest !!


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    this is dark, and then not, sort of like bumping your funny bone, does it hurt or is it funny, very creative and cleverly constructed, you are such a diverse poet, its like a lucky dip, never sure what to expect but you know youll like it any way
    thanks


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    lol...dark for sure, then that ending makes you laugh...so very creative and so orginial...you did it well in 13...
    Best,
    mystic


  • Lady Michaella
    December 2, 2008
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    lol, this is quite humerious in all its seriousness. a brilliant write!
    x


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    You always seem to come up with great things! I love it

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