Scarecrow
stalks hall
with hatchet,
terror vanishes
with burp,
swearing off
midnight snacks.
A contest entry
- DO IT IN 13 WORDS! ME..? YES YOU!! by Lady Michaella.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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haha a wonderful poem love the humourous imagery its wonderful


good luck inthe contest
maralisa


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ha ha . . nice take on the prompt . . good luck in the contest !!


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this is dark, and then not, sort of like bumping your funny bone, does it hurt or is it funny, very creative and cleverly constructed, you are such a diverse poet, its like a lucky dip, never sure what to expect but you know youll like it any way
thanks

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lol...dark for sure, then that ending makes you laugh...so very creative and so orginial...you did it well in 13...

Best,
mystic

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lol, this is quite humerious in all its seriousness. a brilliant write!
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You always seem to come up with great things! I love it


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