The Angel's wings,
Torn in despair;
When her light fades,
Shall no-one care?
A contest entry
- DO IT IN 13 WORDS! ME..? YES YOU!! by Lady Michaella.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very well written your poem is very sad it made me cry i mean it to
Keep up the great work okay -
I like the rhyme in it. It is short and sweet. Congratulations on the silver.
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Somehow I really identify with these words....Painfully touching, dear niece...And you deserved the silver for this and you got it...Good for you!
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Thank you Rose
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omgosh!!! wow, this is amazing it was so simple yet it said so much. in 13 words, just 13 words, omgosh!!! your 13 WORDS spoke volumes i tell ya. totally explains the silver. whoaa... you're awesome buddy. do the world a favour, and keep writing aight? love ya!
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haha thanks!
do the world a favour, and keep being so fun and happy
oh yeah and keep writing too!
love ya!
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gasp!!!
honey darling, this is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!
gahh you are such an amazing poet!!!!!!!!!! it's hard to wrap my mind around how great you are
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hehe woops i meant "made" my day. haha x
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aww thank you! you are too sweet!
thanks so much, you've mad my day
you are an amazing poet too!!! x
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omg
katie u retard this is bloody excelent. this is amazing. this is stunning. u tard
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haha
umm.. thanks?
thankyou x
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You'll win, I agree with Tarryn. I hadn't seen this when I entered.
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Gaby!
Stop it you guys.
Seriously now.
Please play nicely! That's not fair
Both of you are gonna be AMAZING.
You have as much chance as me!
So there. x
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*sigh* u'll win with u and ur brilliant poems
but i shall enter anyway
good luck
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you have as much of a chance as me. or more
good! i'm sure you will do really well!
thanks. you too!
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haha yerr.... im not gonna i cant do it!
cant write it in 13 words wayy to short hehe
xxx
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