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13

13
black cats'
bad luck
is knowing that 9
lives is not enough.



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  • Gvn
    December 2, 2008

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    It's not really random because that whole theme of superstition connects the "13" to the black cat ... I think that's pretty clever (:
    The last line is very powerful.


  • gypsy camp
    December 1, 2008
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    hmmm...


  • Lady Michaella
    December 1, 2008

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    oo, i love this. so simple yet so deep. this really is excelent. random, i might say... but excelent.
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