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Darkness in Light

The darkness in the light
blinds me, envelops me
in cool dusky touch.

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  • Black-Fang
    December 2, 2008

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    awesome
    mmm yerr really good contrast and descriptions

    good luck
    xxx


  • Sunkissed xo
    December 1, 2008

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    Great contrast.
    On one hand the darkness is "blinding" and "enveloping", yet on the other is "cool" and "light".
    You've created a vivid image that is complex and soothing, and very fresh.
    Well done x


  • Lady Michaella
    December 1, 2008

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    this is brilliant.
    Everything about it is stunning
    and it has darkness in the light. beautiful and stunning write.
    xx