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For Keeps

Death is wrought
From iron hate
Well, true death
I kept my soul...

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  • Wolfdog silver member
    March 29
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    Excellent

    A very fine write, indeed. I liked the way you expressed your ideas. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • Wolfdog silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very good write; simple and direct. I like the images this write caused me to have. Thanks for sharing.


  • Kaus Lizzy
    December 2, 2008
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    Its so short but packs a strong punch.


  • Lady Michaella
    December 1, 2008

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    this is strong, powerful and .. 13 words
    well done, this is amazing
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