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Past the storm

Slowly the wind crashes about,
How it crashes in the depths of my mind,
The stress turns to dust-
As I turn, and what do I find?

Alas! A road shining mysteriously bright,
Deep in the forest of the night,
It calms the darkness of the trees,
It moves throughout the once-cruel breeze,

My mind moves past the storm-
that collapsed into a mist of blue,
That once consumed my mind whole,
Is now a heaven of rainbow of hue!

Author notes

Short? Well good. This poem is directed to to close people to me. Both of you feel better, because I sure do!
xoxo

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  • l...
    December 2, 2008
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    wow this is so good!!! i love the picture you painted here, i really like it!!!

  • Black-Fang
    December 2, 2008

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    wow miki i really like this!
    i love the way it changes form in the middle stanza, it works really well with the poem
    another brilliant write from you my dear
    keep it up

    xxxx


  • Sunkissed xo
    December 1, 2008

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    The utter beauty of this is something to behold. The final line is superb. You create a haven of peace, light and colour that warms the heart. I've found this very healing, it's really made me feel better. Thank you, dear friend
    May you keep shining like this beautiful heaven of rainbow hue x x x