I'll always look back on the things we had
The good the scary the bad
You were the biggest mistake I'll ever make
but never will I regret you
Because something about what we had was true
So I'll always look back and smile
because you made me happy for a while
A contest entry
- TITLES by HeavensNewestAngel.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 14 entries
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Tell me what you feel and think about it.
Comments
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Wow, there was a lot put into this poem.
Short, but in a good way.
The line "You were the biggest mistake I'll ever make" was lovely, because of the inside rhyming.
however, the last three lines seemed a little off... I'm thinking maybe it's just that they're not split up into the same four-line format as the top half.
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A happy regret...
...you express the feelings succinctly and vividly in your poem.
It is sort of happy and sad at the same time...
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i know what this is kind of like in a way, i mean the good times are just that the good times, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This is a great poem you wrote. Good luck in my contest!
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