You'll never be enlightened,
when you hold back,
fearing something
that doesn't have a name.
Because of power and addiction…
Author notes
I hope its not to rushed but I have to head off to work.
In a list
A contest entry
- super-duper doom-quickie [7.20.20] by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended December 1, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty is a must...
Comments
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congrats on your bronze sweety
you wrote very well -
Nicely done, congrats on the Bronze~
Tim


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Thought provoking and well done... Congratulations on the shiny

Ken

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Good luck...
Beautiful job, this is an excellent piece. Outstanding and good luck...

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Rushed, perhaps a bit, but still very addictive and compelling. Well done!

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