I must quicken
or I must rust
Dreams burn away
emptiness
I don't regret actions
only outcomes
Treasures remain buried
unless...
Author notes
"I tasted the ambrosia of maddened impulse."
-Charles Baxter
A contest entry
- super-duper doom-quickie [7.20.20] by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended December 1, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Many blessings in the contest.
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I prefer Adidas, but that title=♥
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Loved it, great meaning. I tend not to think things through... haha. Excellently penned, good formatting. Enjoyed reading.
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A really terrific write... I agree... I don't regret actions... Well done, sir...
Ken
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Nice write, good job and good luck...
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Definitely an interesting take... Not what I was expecting, but original nonetheless. Good luck to you
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oh and I forgot to mention lol neato poem too
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lololol just do it ....neato reserve
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ermm never mind.
You got any beer? -
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no beer but jelly shots at Dee's contest page though
Wo0t
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That wasn't the reserve name. That's what I decided to name it after I wrote it.
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you are so in where
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