Thine essence
is sweet ambrosia,
an aphrodisiac I cannot resist.
Beloved, my true desire ~
let me lose myself in thee.
Author notes
"I tasted the ambrosia of maddened impulse."
-Charles Baxter
20 Words
For my Beloved ~ She delights my senses with lime & coconut 
In a list
A contest entry
- super-duper doom-quickie [7.20.20] by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended December 1, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very romantic words that drip with lust. Very nicely said.
~ Joyce
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Hot!
This was one hot message to that special someone. Sorry if I haven't commented on your poetry lately, Tim, for I have had a lot on my mind lately. Send me a message one time, OK? TTYL.
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Wow I got so curious about the lime and coconut
if it's something like an ambrosia, it must be really good.
Congratulations on the Gold
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It's a body spray my Beloved wears, it's like a pina colada/margarita mix. It's a brand called Bodycology.
She was riding with her dad the other day and he asked who was drinking!
Thank you ~
Tim
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Congratulations on the gold, you did an outstanding job. Any you certainly deserved it.
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Well done and congratulations
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Oh, and I forgot to mention that I also love lime and coconut
Congrats on your gold
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You did a great job. I love the font, though it makes it a little hard to read. Beautiful job and good luck...
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Ooh, very nice! I'm glad that you kept this sensual instead of full-on erotic. Well done & good luck
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