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White





devoid ye melanize
          cool mystical
     soft emptiness
            arcing a sea of crystal
   joyous ecstatic frozen moments
               vestal caucasian whiteness
      chromatically pure untouched pristine
             fresh clean bursting cleansing splendor
   undefiled refined spotless purity
              how treasure I your slender touch
                   Zantedeschia aethiopica

 

 

 Zantedeschia aethiopica Lily

 

 

 

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  • dewfall
    December 2, 2008
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    applauded with thanks

    this slender touch upon the senses


  • Cat gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    the images that draw so much rich white in this piece are wonderful- just lovely visuals to reflect and balance upon.. thank you so much for gracing this contest

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  • Grunts Girl gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    'arching sea of crystal'
    i adored this line

    many many many thoughts and images here of whites and beauty

    thank you for this great entry into our contest