i love the way you sway
and how you just automatically know the right way
into my heart you have imprinted
with your smooth words and your soft touches
i feel so loved with you around
my feet are way off the ground
you have touched my soul
as no other before you
im not sure if i could live with out you
i have realized i love you
and i sigh a very happy sigh
for all my fears have said bye-bye
we move and sway as one
and we realize that we were made to be one
which is all for the best for i am addicted to you
A contest entry
- Titles, Word Prompt, Pictures, Quotes, Song Title :] by sophia moonfairy.
1100 points, ended December 6, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~Be My Muse~*~ by Zane Rose.
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im addicted to you to anna
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thats nice to know mr smarty pants
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This is a very sweet little poem. It has a lot of feeling in it. I enjoyed reading it!
Good job, good luck, and keep up the great writing!
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this is a lovely poem
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thank you very much
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im should be I'm in the ninth line.
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without is all one word.
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thank you for bringin these to my attention
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A very touching write
Are you aware that I should always be a capital or did you mean it to be that way, as I see you have no capitals at all. Maybe this is the way you meant it to be.
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yes i ment for it to be that way because it is a persons thoughts and a persons thoughts arent always gramatically correct
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OMG! I love this so much. this reminds me of someone special and I like that a lot. this is such a sweet write. filled with happiness, sadness, tears and love. I loved how you written. this is such a cute piece
it makes me smile and It shows you are thankful that they took your fear away. now you are truly happy but in tears at the same time. I loved this it made me feel warm and fuzzy inside also great titled it matches perfectly with the poem 
thanks for entering and good luck in the contest you are truly talented.
Many love and blessing
Maria
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thank you
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this is good
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thank you much
Namaste
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you changed the rhyme of the last stanza...why?
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err cause it fit better that way wit the flow at least i thought so
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