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Miracles [a short little story for my love]

The way she walks reminds me of the first time I witnessed a shooting star, barreling across the sky in a green blur. It made me smile just like the sound of her coming my way, the disappearing of the light like her running agin. Gone away from me, never coming back.

Her eyes remind me that miracles are real. A glowing dark brown, not all black, lighting up the skies in my head, like our first real kiss. In my heart, I always knew it was her.. It IS her, but only God could give his angel to me.

Only a miracle.

She came at the right wrong time, tearing me away from my misery only to let me see how much worse it could get, and it did, but every moment spent holding her against my cold-hearted chest made my tears turn into a warm living thing. Pain met addiction met lust met ME. But hey, I deserved it all. It was all a set up for my miracle. See, the most amazing girl I’d ever known told me “I love you” and turned me from a growling monster to a cuddling one. All my scars healed, and I found solace in my first love of music again.

Lo and behold, my heart drew in warmth again, another soul intertwined into mine, and I was reborn. Stronger, happier than ever, Iam, with a perpetual love.

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I love you so much baby.
Don't ever forget that

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  • MyZeroForever
    April 15
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    I love this :]
    you should write a part two xDDD

    • you read it AGAIN?? lol i forgot i even wrote this i was like wha is this? i thought you wrote it then i was like hey...green..xD haha. i guess i can but it's not a story it's true


      • MyZeroForever
        April 15
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        well thats cuz you dont write me stuff so i have to keep reading your old stuff lol well write me another one =/ pwease?

  • MyZeroForever
    January 10
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    hehe I like reading this=]
    when was our first real kiss?
    like really, when?


  • MyZeroForever
    December 1, 2008

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    If you wrote this to make me cry, it worked. I'm such a cry baby, I swear. I really love this, it finally gives me an idea of how you feel. Which is good because this actually reassures me. I don't even deserve this, I don't even deserve you.

    "A glowing dark brown, not all black." Ahaha. I love you. You stubborn brat.

    P.S. I like this background:]

    mineminemineminemine<33
    I'm saving this.


    • MyZeroForever
      December 2, 2008
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      Aww, I just read this again.
      its so pretty, I love this. =] Iloveyou. hehehe.
      "the most amazing girl I’d ever known told me “I love you” and turned me from a growling monster to a cuddling one."
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