Talk to me. Care for me. Adore me.
While someone else is on your mind.
Tell me that you love for me so much.
While your hands are about intertwined.
Don't worry about my emotions.
I'll be just fine, don't you worry.
While the tears stream down.
Everything seems to get blury.
All I wanted was some of your time.
For you to listen care about me.
But nothing matters anymore, dear.
You've got "her" now...don't you see?
Maybe I just don't see the good.
Is she prettier than me? Sweeter?
Maybe it's me..maybe I'm going crazy.
But I call bullshit. I call you a cheater.
You're always on mind, always there.
I'm in love with you, DID YA HEAR THAT?
Watch my tears hit the cold floor.
All over. Drop, fall, split and splat.
This is just like a terrible annoyance.
Something really bad like an itch.
OH I GET IT. It's that chick you like.
That stupid, ugly, good for nothing BITCH.
Don't you dare play with my emotions.
Don't you dare tell me "I love you"
I'm not giving anymore chances.
This is the last fuck up. The last adieu.
Please tell me what you think
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Very, very raw, my dear. The emotions you had when writing this are clearly visible and screaming oh so loudly. I love it.
I think I wrote something like this, uhh, a few years ago.
Only mine was a lot worse, because... I think I dropped the "eff bomb", like... a zillion times. BUT YOU DIDN'T. So yay to you, Tori. 
Keep a strong heart, love. ♥
I'm here if you need me.
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wicked
i liked this piece,full of raw emotion.
i really felt for you in this piece.
i loved that very last bit:"The last adieu"
sounds like a good title to me?
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