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[ Here I am again ]

Here I am again
at the fence which I fear
too high to jump over
Too low to climb

Every time I come to it
The same time every year
Emotions come flooding
The body can't keep up part time

When the mind works full time
And you seem as though
The fence is surrounding life
SUFFOCATING you

Have you commited such a crime
To cause this wall to be built
TO be the ultimate barricade
THe greatest of guilt that you knew

STOP running
          START overcoming

Fears
          of
                Who you are & what you do

Author notes

this is for a contsest based on this quote
19- Don't ever take a fence down until you know why it was put up.
-Robert Frost

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  • upperworld06
    December 2, 2008

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    i like the first stanza a lot, really describes the suffocation the best i think. good job and good luck