My dear friend and guide,
I love you.
Pretend you have a soul,
I need you.
Tough strings and gentle curves,
I want you.
You sing to me your songs
I hear you.
You're a part of my emotions
I yearn for you.
Companion to my heart,
Take care of you.
Melancholy and hopes
I trust you.
My precious guitar,
I feel you.
You never leave my life,
I beg you.
My dear friend and guide,
I love you.
A contest entry
- Give me feeling by Cant force beloved.
700 points, ended December 10, 2008, 57 entries
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Thge only part of this that I can see that I would change is
You part of my emotions
I yearn for you.
Although it could be
You; part of my emotions
or
You... a part of my emotions
or
You are a part of my emotions
or
You; my emotions
As I read this though it seems to me that this was just a simple key stroke mistake and the overall poem is touching and sweet.
A very sincere write of love and companionship of an instumental tool to your expressions,
Great poem!
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Thank you for the comment. It was helpful
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i realy connected with this one, this is great, flowed lovely too, well done.
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LOL I guess your guitar is your life long companion. LOL I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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DavidTennantRocks,
Guitar is my companion and the best friend too. Thank you for your comment.
I had a great oportunity to enter this poetry to your great contest.
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Aww...that's so precious.
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Good.
Nice work. Very sweet.
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Thank you, Evemauy
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