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The Cutter's New Scar

hey there friend,
did you slip up again?
here we are and
I see the scars
your arm's now painted
It's bright and red
you took the knife
you sliced the skin
you see the blood?
did you watch it drip?
you said you'd stop
you said it's done
I had your word
you had my trust
you broke the bond
you're in your lie
so go ahead,
think you're better
tell me more
what I don't know
the pain is worse
you feel alone
you feel so distant
the grave is dug
so here it is friend
tell me why
I'm not enough
tell me why my
words aren't heard
too many times
this scene has played
too many times you
hide your wounds
I'm right here
and you pull away
I'm right here
and the finale comes
you think I don't get it
you think I can't see
It's an addiction,
a relapse, and the
withdrawal is here
you think I don't feel it
I don't know the tempt
your life is bad
and mine is better
your state of mind &
the thoughts you carry
well dear friend,
you are WRONG!

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