bby I’m b-r-o-k-e-n
lying
[[beneath you]]
on this linoleum floor.
love, I’d &hearts to tell you something
to make you understand
[[or care]]
“I love you”
but
“you’re killing me”
*Love Kills*
all *imperfection* wraiths know
as I c_a_r_v_e_d into my skin
that night
that fight
I always lost [[lose]]
&& ended [[end]] up consoling you,
like I was never the one
who’d been hurt
b.r.u.i.s.e.d.
here on this ^i^c^e^c^o^l^d floor,
like I was the aberration
(to refuse you).
not the victim.
(I just feel like a m i s t a k e .)
&&I tell you everytime
:::.b.e.n.e.a.t.h.:.y.o.u.:.on.the. : f :l : o : o : r .:::
give me [[all the blame]]
&&something more…
because to please you,
I made myself into your whore…
…but I didn’t expect you to treat me like one
&hearts
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Aethyr<3
i luv it...i can ttly relate and i understand. it was written amazingly!! so innocent...btw- i luv ur page too!
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OMG!!!! I loooove it! I know this feeling well! This poem is sooooo stellar!
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i farking love dirty purdy.
you executed this extremely well.
fantasmic job
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wow, awesome simply awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
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woah... O.O
that's pretty amazing right there. I love your DP. -
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOOOOOVEEE ITTT
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this is cool. all the added nonsense kind of kills it but... i do love what you are trying to say. if it was written normally it would be a perfect piece.
i especially LOVE the last couple of lines. i have been through that before.
i really enjoyed reading this.
your Faerie
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