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I watch.

I watch as he cries
I watch as he screams
I watch as he sinks
I watch as he wastes away





I try to hold him down
so he doesn't hurt himself.

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  • StarIlluminated
    December 2, 2008
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    This is great Emma! It flows well and just overall done nicely.

    *KT*


  • DeadlyTurnip
    December 1, 2008
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    Lol this could so be about me right now. Nice write.