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this
i love you
feels like starched clothes,
dry and sweltering warm

the rest
of our words feel like
a december avalanche.

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  • transit
    December 4, 2008

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    oooo

    wonderful! amazing!!!!! I love your poems and the simplicity behind the complexity. amazing meaning. keep writing yeah this is though- provoking yet makes so much sense

    loveees,
    transit~


  • Walk-Free
    December 1, 2008

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    ahh! finally! another awesome poem!

    you guys are nvr write anything new ):

    but finally, you did (:

    I LOVE IT!

    and could you try coming this thursday? you need some fresh air and sunlight from your studying cacoon!