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Serenata

My heart aches, for your sweet  lullaby
as the poetic Visions of your  allure enters  my dreams
and I cannot escape your  intoxicating kiss

You words have stolen a piece of my fragile soul
that has  caused my heart to burst at the seams
Enveloping my senses, as you  lay me bare
your  sweet serenade  is your  power over me

The soft whisper  of your verses
has unlocked the
the passion within the  depths
of my  emotions
 
And when our  quills  collide
it shall write the decadent  lyrics 
of  our  romantic serenade


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  • Zenda-Lokki
    December 3, 2008
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    Wow x beautiful words here hun x Thank you so much for your entry x


  • Desire gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Wow~

    This can swoon and bring a person down to a knee
    Love the emotions also the images You have penned with Power Beautiful One~
    You take the reader right there with You~
    to experience the taste of passion's ink
    Bravo!! Love this
    Keep that quill dancing~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • Scarlet Ambrosia
      December 2, 2008
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      Desire,
      thanks fro the lovely comment, i guess i still have my touch then, i thought i have lost it lol ....


  • penman gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    Excellent

    This is filled with such great emotion. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.