My heart aches, for your sweet lullaby
as the poetic Visions of your allure enters my dreams
and I cannot escape your intoxicating kiss
You words have stolen a piece of my fragile soul
that has caused my heart to burst at the seams
Enveloping my senses, as you lay me bare
your sweet serenade is your power over me
The soft whisper of your verses
has unlocked the
the passion within the depths
of my emotions
And when our quills collide
it shall write the decadent lyrics
of our romantic serenade
Please tell me what you think
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Wow x beautiful words here hun x Thank you so much for your entry x

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Wow~
This can swoon and bring a person down to a knee
Love the emotions also the images You have penned with Power Beautiful One~
You take the reader right there with You~
to experience the taste of passion's ink
Bravo!! Love this
Keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~


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Desire,
thanks fro the lovely comment, i guess i still have my touch then, i thought i have lost it lol ....
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Excellent
This is filled with such great emotion. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.





