I'm falling please catch me
falling into an endless sea
slowly drifting down away
can't see the light of day
I reached out for your hand
you didn't reach only stand
I watched you go not a tear
it's the one thing that I fear
you used to care but no more
there watching from the shore
no chance to even say goodbye
before the water swallowed sky
blackness everywhere around me
it is the only color that I can see
no longer knowing up from down
wondering when I'll finally drown
when this moment does come
never again to see my home
I'll go in peace, live no pain
no longer treated inhumane
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option 5
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Comments
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Oh very nice ryhming. the imagery is very nice as well.
over all a very nice write. thank you for entering and good luck.
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Hmm... interesting imagery.
Thanks for entering my contest. -
nice rhyming, ^^, and i liked the images it portrayed, great write! thanks so much for entering!!!
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I liked the rhyme scheme, it flowed rather nicely as well. Very emotional! and very good!
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