Here's wishing you Happy Holidays, and I hope your blessings abound.
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JeannieD Hunter
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A contest entry
- 2 of 3 rounds of Christmas contests by daviscth.
2000 points, ended December 8, 2008, 31 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This could go in many directions. But never could it of had as many meaning as this does.In the Christain celebration,you've shown the true spirit of the season in including a wish to all faith persuasions.
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I'm terrible at this kind of thing but you've got it down pretty well. I love words that echo their actual meaning and "abound" is sure one of them. Good luck in the contest, daughter.
Dad
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This is a beautiful sentence dear. I love the imagery in your words. But I see you have combined both your entries. You can either leave it like this or create another entry. If you leave it like this, it narrows your chances of winning though.
If you enter again, just put the link to the words you used from this entry and put it on your second entry. If I have totally confused you, that's okay cause I confuse myself. 
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This was a sweet encouraging admonishment-I pray your blessings abound and overtake you at every corner. I know God is a giver of good gifts and it's HIs delight to bless you, since you are His daughter. Best wishes in the contest~vj
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Very nice use of your two words.
Best wishes in the contest
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