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Haunting Looks

Oh, your beauty so unworldly,
I fell that I'm unworthy.
The way your eyes peirce my soul
I loose all my control.
And how you creep up on me,
Making me drop to my knees,
It is something I cannot go without.
Even though I have my doubts,
You will always have me,
I only wish I can have you.

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