bruised assult
removed itself
and healing began
the moment
you were erased
Author notes
20 poets
12 words
prompt ~ absent paws
show emotion
be brilliant
A contest entry
- 12 words of meaning by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended December 3, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive critique please.
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sometimes the best way to
srart healing.. many have found this best- still paomfull as ever...mac
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WOW!
Nothing like that one fine slice of the universe!!!
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how creatively grasping... x
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Beautiful,
This reminds me of how love enters and exits our lives. In order to heal, you have to remove the infection...
So nicely done.
Criss
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A lot said in a few words my friend. Twelve words of meaning indeed!
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